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Default Re: Website review appreciated- Online invitations card business

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Originally Posted by Belinda82 View Post
Thanks Benedict for viewing my website and commenting! =)

Yes, I think I will need to improve the images. Thats something on my to-do list.

As for the shopping cart function, I do know what you mean about the flow. But unfortunately this was the cart function given by my web hosting company. Would you know of any good companies who provide cart services for a website thats already been set-up?

Also your comment about the lack of engagement, any ideas on how to make it more engaging?

Thanks for all the help! Much appreciated!
Hi Belinda

Yes letting IT people drive your sales process invariably leads to challenges. The problem arises from looking at the solutions or technologies before looking at the problem. To bolt something else on will no solve anything and may make things worse.

To get passion into this you need to get your passion on the page and that comes from being you and not what you think you need to be. We are generally all taught that when writing we have to write like Shakespeare or a Banker. Not true. What people want is to relate to other people. You are you, be you (easier said than done at the start as that seems to be a Zen riddle).

As for creating flow, well I offer a lot in those articles in that link above. Otherwise if you contact me directly we can see if there is a way to help each other move forward.

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