Hi venessa
A few tips
1) reduce the file size of the header its 84k and should be about 15k
2)Get rid of the people counter, they are very Undude
3)Change the title of "about me" (how many people will do a search on that?)
4)Get rid of the company name and "about me" from the page title and put something meaningful in there.
5) Read all my articles on getting the right
search engine company.
Lots of other articles under the articles tab
Please keep in mind that this has just cost you about 50% of your marketing budget!