Re: Appreciate reviews of my website
Are you getting much traffic from Google?
Considering how old the domain is, you have very few links,and your site has not been index for quite a while by the search engines.
The grey seems to be a distraction - does not add any value.
It's good to see an opt in box offering a incentive "NEW! Our Free Six Part Weight Loss Series: The Forgotten Ingredients For Weightloss Sign up for free today"
This should be on everypage, either above the fold or on the sidebar, add a bigger button, with my appealing "subscribe" join or get our newsletter
Your font changes size through out site
I like your Story how you changed your body.
The copy needs a bit of work, try show them how they will benefit from services and how they will feel being fit and healthy.
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