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Default Re: updated webdesign portfolio

Hi Craig,

(I'm no expert), but I'll comment anyway :) ...

The top logo is way to small and not easy to read.

The scrolling portfolio section takes up most of your real estate above the fold (it's a nice effect but I think it takes too much away from the rest of your page).

Your front page copy is weak, it's all about what you do as opposed what you can do your your customer.

Although I don't mind the simple design I believe you need to have a little more glitz and glamor to sell in the webdesign business these days - as an example (I haven't done this) - but do a google search in Australia for web designers and look at the first 3-6 and compare how they present compared to your site. Ask family members, strangers (anyone), at first glance you would choose to build a site for you - and why did you make that choice.

Good luck
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