Hi AnaLucia,
Feel free to disregard / disagree with me here, but I don't like the fact that your slogan says 'just hammocks' when you are trying to sell hammocks.
I mean, if I considered a new hammock a reasonably large purchase, if I had looked around and wanted to get a good quality one, and then I found a website that looked good and I read "More than just hammocks" I might feel that my purchase was being belittled. I mean isn't a hammock enough ?"
Obviously this might not go through someones conscious mind, but imagine MacDonald's slogan was "Much More than just burgers..." Thats a little disrespectful to people who love burgers.
How about
"Swing by South America - Authentic Hammocks, Blankets and Handicraft"
"Sieata in Style - Authentic Hammocks, Blankets and Handicraft"
"Heaven is a warm Hammock - Hammock Heaven - Authentic Hammocks, Blankets and Handicraft"
"Stop. Hammock time! - Hammock Heaven"
Cheers
Sam
Quote:
Originally Posted by AnaLucia  Mine is "Much more than just hammocks..."
for two reasons:
1. Is not a simple hammock what my clients will get: its a Genuine Mexican hammock handwoven in the Yucatan peninsula of Mexico: so its the real deal!
2. Because I started selling hammocks, and then Mexican Blankets, and then Mexican ponchos, and textiles, Guatemalan worry dolls and handicrafts, Mexican Papel Picado banners... anyway I expanded the range but decided to keep our name as Hammock Heaven.... much more than just hammocks |