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Below are two draft design concepts for a new training type DVD for small business owners / network marketers. At this stage the "copy" is likely to change - fonts and perhaps the colors etc. However I would really like some feedback on the background graphic. Which one do you like and why ?





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I like them both but I prefer the second one because it's less cliche and a bit simpler.

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I think the second one too. It is much easier to read - with less info all over the place, and the graphic is good.

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Another vote for the second one, its less busy and the sub heading is easier to read.

Is that the papyrus font being used?

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I prefer the second one as well. The picture speaks to the series title 'Follow The Leaders'. It is also more simplistic and easy on the eye.

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Hey guys thanks for your feed back.

I get attached to the design process sometimes and it helps greatly to get independant feedback, please keep it coming - it really helps when one is about to invest funds in to the production of a new product. Very appreciate !!!

The font is Tempus Sans ITC
Not one I would usually use but I wanted a relaxed, trendy kinda vibe to the cover.

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Definately the second one (nice pair of legs)

Simple , clean and you can read the finer print

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Hi,

The second one gets my vote also.

BTW, love the "follow the leaders" logo.

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Yet another vote for the second one. The first image is too busy and messy with the footprints. And I don't get the hands in the air.

I would like to see the warning label in the lower left corner. That would leave the image even cleaner and clearer.

I like the fonts.

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I prefer the second one too.
First one is too busy.

(Although I'm a bit puzzled by the use of footprints in the sand as a motif for a dose of wisdom from leaders in the direct selling industry.)

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