Vacuum website review

[VacuumRobot.com.au]

Hi guys,

I'm glad to have found this forum, it's very useful, as everyone here is heading towards the same mindset. I just found out about this section, so I thought I could make the most out of this.

Can you guys please review my website and salescopy? vacuumrobot.com.au - It's a new product that is able to Vacuum Clean your home Automatically - hands free. You set the time and day you want it to vacuum, it does just that.

Before my website was worst than the current.. I have to admit, everything is just so messy. Although now is better than before.. it's still not up to standards lol..Any tips from you guys I could use?

I also need some ideas about marketing my business.. it's going quite steady.. but the income is low.. part time/casual income :/ But it's not bad considering it's 1-2 months old business.. Need massive help!


Best Regards,

Dave

[SamW from BPS]

Before I forget, don't say 'While stocks last'. To me it looks like you're short stocked, and don't have enough resources to fund your business.

All the pictures I assume you have taken yourself, crop out the wood floor and make it look like it is on a white sheet of paper, or do just that. Make sure there are no shadows or anything.

I like the header and around the top bit of the site, but as you scroll down it starts to look like an eBay listing =D! Utilise the power of the web and make it look so much more .

[Tennesyboy]

no offense but your site looks quite unprofessional to me and it seems that as you really took these pics by yourself and the whole design....

[VacuumRobot.com.au]

No offense taken, this is what I want isn't it? A black hat comment, so I can fix the problems.
I might need to hire a designer.

So how do you think I can fix the pictures? Sam recommended taking picture on a white sheet, I would need to try it then.

Tell me what to do to fix all the mess up.. much thanks!!!

Dave

[Adam Randall]

Hi Dave
You keep mentioning you are selling stuff off of your site.

If it was me and you are selling enough, I would not radically change anything at the moment.

If I was in the market for a robot Vacuum cleaner, there is nothing that would stop me buying from your site.

Some of your pages in the news and articles are coming up with errors though and that earth 4 energy with 55 pop ups made me close out of the site and not want to go back.

[VacuumRobot.com.au]

Hi Adam,

Thanks for your comment, I've removed those pages. I'm thinking if I should remove the useless articles off my pages.. but it seemed im getting a few traffic off them lol..

I'm making a decent part time income, but my bounce rate for my website is at 75-78%.. which is quite too high.. that means my website is not really that good..

I want to make it professional looking.. but no idea how to..maybe should hire a designer, but designers can be as clueless..the really good ones cost heaps..

[SamW from BPS]

I can make you an alright one. You don't have to use it, but you don't have to pay me.

[VacuumRobot.com.au]

That is very nice of you Sam, ive sent you a private message.

Dave