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Re: Website and content review
On the home page, typo error Tradies Media is recongised should be recognised or recognized.
Both spellings of 's' and 'z' are now recognised depending on UK or US English. But be consistent. You have it as recognized further down the page.
Always have someone proofread and check your copy - particularly when it's being published.
You have other spelling and grammar errors throughout the site.
I also thought you were marketing to trades people.
The use of the word 'exponentially' seems to be misplaced, considering it is a reference to mathematical calculations ... Exponential growth (including exponential decay when the growth rate is negative) occurs when the growth rate of the value of a mathematical function is proportional to the function's current value.
I would choose a different word.
Good luck with your business.
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