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Hi,

It would be great if you can give me a review for my website.

1. What needs reviewing? website
2. What does your business do? web designing and email marketing
3. Who is your target market? tradies
4. What specific concerns do you have? the gramma and contents

http://www.tradiesmedia.com.au/

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Hi Chamnup,

To help us help you, it would be great if you could copy and paste the answers to the four questions at the top of this page into your post.

Good luck for your review,
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1. What needs reviewing? website
2. What does your business do? web designing and email marketing
3. Who is your target market? tradies
4. What specific concerns do you have? the gramma and contents

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4. What specific concerns do you have? the gramma and contents
hahahaha! oh the ironing! (yes yes, i know what i typed).

anyway

your name confuses the hell out of me. i thought you were a web design co that focused on "tradies". obviously youre not, but that would be an excellent point of difference!

the front page is a little busy and i think the top graphic with the huge vid below the fold is a little much.

not feeling the search bar in the top right. would rather some contact details as im not sure what i would search for on any site thats not a blog or e-commerce.

also, not a fan of the 1000+ instant followers on facebook thing. but each to their own.


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On the home page, typo error Tradies Media is recongised should be
recognised or recognized.

Both spellings of 's' and 'z' are now recognised depending on UK or US English. But be consistent. You have it as recognized further down the page.

Always have someone proofread and check your copy - particularly when it's being published.

You have other spelling and grammar errors throughout the site.

I also thought you were marketing to trades people.

The use of the word 'exponentially' seems to be misplaced, considering it is a reference to mathematical calculations ... Exponential growth (including exponential decay when the growth rate is negative) occurs when the growth rate of the value of a mathematical function is proportional to the function's current value.

I would choose a different word.


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yea, tradies is my target audience - i guess somehow.. I sway off-course

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yea, tradies is my target audience - i guess somehow.. I sway off-course
id say so.

even the name conjures up a particular look and feel to your website (bluntstones, black and yellow, hard hats, etc)

but its none of that. you have some great clients already so messing with it now might not be wise.

however, if you were to really target tradies, you could have some awesome fun design the page.

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