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Join Date: Nov 2008
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| | Re: Feed back on new Website
Hi and welcome to FS. Just a note on your tagline in your signature - the correct grammar should read Fashionable prescription Glasses that do not break your budget!
There are also some grammar spelling items to fix in your text pages - please get a copywriter to check properly. You have a mixture of singular, present and past tense within some sentences which also needs fixing.
From a designer/typography point of view, the font on the home page advert is not a good choice. Fancy typefaces should never be capitalised, and the font does not look clean and neat, which is the look you wish to project for the Cool Geek.
If you are going to say 110% guarantee, then you should qualify it somewhere else on the page. Add a small asterisk in the text, then refer to it at the bottom of the page and explain what that means.
All the best for success with your new venture.