
24-12-09
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 | Power Member | | Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Eastern Suburbs/Yarra Valley, Melbourne
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Re: 2010 here we come
G'day Warren,
i agree with most of what others have said. To me, when i'm looking for services like yours and i arrive at your website I want to see why I should use you. At the moment I can't see that and It's probably the large text (secondary menu really) under the slideshow that is taking up the room which should be used to sell, not direct.
With the "FREE digital performance assessment" box, I wouldn't mind seeing "valued at $XYX" there. This would have people clicking a lot more.
The box at the bottom saying "a dynamic new branding and marketing tool between Page Advertising" doesn't mean anything to me as a marketer, nor a small business owner. It's really a bunch of jiberish.
I'd move the 5 reasons to work with us into a better position and maybe rephrase a lot of it. When i look at your website I see a lot of what you do and have done, but nothing about the benefits of using you (e.g. create a website that will attract new customers and digital marketing that will get the most out of existing ones while you barely lift a finger).
If you can work out a few good stats like "our clients, on average, experienced a XY% increase in revenue through the web" or "4/5 clients now list their website as their most effective marketing tool" that would help as well.
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