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peppie
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I would replace that photo of you, it’s out of focus and doesn’t fit with the rest of the great looking shots.

Do you know anyone in marketing, can you find someone? Especially someone who knows online marketing. Because I would get one or two such people to look over what you have and particularly the text to see how it reads to them.

I did notice on a quick scan through some little inconsistencies like we/us in one place and I in another. To my mind it has to seem consistent as well as appealing to the market you are trying to target.