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LeelaCosgrove
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I’ll leave the design feedback for the designers … that’s not my area.

However, from a copy point of view:

Headlines are not compelling.

Value proposition is not compelling.

There’s no call to action.

Who is your target market? I can’t tell from your copy (which is a BIG problem … I should be able to read your copy and know EXACTLY who you are aiming at).

INVEST in a professional copywriter – I guarantee you’ll see at LEAST 100% higher conversions.

On a marketing note. NEVER give your time away for free – you devalue yourself and what you do.