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Renee Barber
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bluegum, post: 14413 wrote:
Can someone please review the updated version of my postcard? The links to the postcard are above in the previous reply.

Here are some impressions from a quick scan:

  • I’m not keen on the colours (grey and orange?)
  • You need to proof the back again as there are some punctuation problems, mainly to do with possessives.
  • Also, ‘Experience the transformation today?’ with a query on the end doesn’t sound very convincing.

I hope this helps.