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Great Start for a website

When I first looked at the website, my eyes were going all over the page – very unsettling – there’s no focal point

Have a look at some websites that you like, and see where your eyes focus

Your first headline : “Thanks for visiting Fido’s Funhouse!”
-A more productive headline maybe: “One Stop Online Shop For Your Pet” – to quickly tell the visitor what your website is all about

You sell stuff online? So perhaps put the opening hours under the street address rather than the centre of the page

Is the focus of the website to direct people to your physical store – or to sell products online?

We played around with a very different designs and headlines – that’s the great thing about websites – you can quickly change stuff until you get it right