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Chris – was just looking through your website. There are some grammatical errors on your About Us section;

“This interest lead him to complete a degree in Software Engineering, before start his own computer business. “When I start my first business, I discovered my true life’s passion” says Chris, “That is helping other businesses leverage the Internet to grow their business.”

start should be starting

start should be started

So the above should read

This interest lead him to complete a degree in Software Engineering, before starting his own computer business. “When I started my first business, I discovered my true life’s passion” says Chris, “That is helping other businesses leverage the Internet to grow their business.”