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When I saw your post, I was expecting a professional looking enticing website, even before looking at the name of the site.

When I saw the page I was disappointed, first the images didn’t load on both IE and Chrome not sure why. and 2nd the page was so long I got tired just scrolling down trying to find something interesting :-)

I am no expert, but first thing I would do is get a professional theme applied to the site which would make it much more lively and then make the no more than 1+ screens long with the one thing that people should really understand about your offering.

I’ve quit smoking a few years ago actually thought about it today on the way to work, it’s been very easy but I miss it sometimes. I hate these people than can smoke once a month or so :-)