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Four things that stand out to me:

Emotive Pictures
For example, if you are writing a post about chocolate making, show us a photo! I want to FEEL what it’s like to make chocolate, I want to engage on a personal level.

Scannable Text
If I am time poor, which most people are, I want to be able to understand what your blog is about by quickly scanning headings and bullet points. If I am interested, I will read further.

SEO
The blog isn’t geared for search engines. I recommend at least activating an SEO friendly permalink and getting the All in One SEO plugin.

http://www.searchenginejournal.com/seo-friendly-url-structure/4556/
http://wordpress.org/extend/plugins/all-in-one-seo-pack/

Soul
The blog is missing soul. I want to know who you are and your blog’s raison d’être. By giving your blog that personal touch, it will naturally lend itself towards being more social.