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Hi Edwina,

Firstly, I love the shirts, they look really nice.

If you’re only selling shirts though i’d probably remove the left side margin. Clothing is all about the look so i’d be more inclined to have some nice models on the front wearing the shirts etc… then they could go shopping from there.

Overall though, a great start.

PS: If you have a “me we I” website, I’d highly recommend you read The Ultimate Salesletter by Dan Kennedy – it’s less than $10 from Amazon if you get the ebook version and it’ll get your headspace right before you start writing copy for your website – it’s a fantastic investment.