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I suggest having a lot more than 33 fans on your page (even if you have to buy zombie fans) before you start claiming the kind of authority on facebook marketing that the ebook suggests you do. I’d look at the title of your book, then look at that number, then move on…

In regards to the PDF. It just looks like a word doc that has been converted to a PDF. You need to make the headings stand out a lot more, and you need to make the front cover make people want to keep reading – at the moment it looks like the minutes to a board meeting.

I’d also suggest adding a table of contents.

…and then finally, you need to deliver at least $67 worth of value if you’re gonna say it’s worth that. Otherwise people will feel like they’ve been tricked into liking your page, and their feelings toward your business may not be what you’d hoped for.