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joselin7410
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Safe Skies, post: 107885 wrote:
Hi All

Just wondered if you could take 2 minutes and give me some feedback on which one of these is best, still got to do a little grammar and spelling, but if you went to this page what would read better to you.

http://tinyurl.com/6rpn3we

or

http://tinyurl.com/8a86ec8

Any feedback would be so good

Thanks

G

the first