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Hi Jeremy. You have some strong work within the folio with some obvious talent with Illustrator/vectors.
Homepage not so good:
- Not enough contrast in Palette
- Doesn’t pass the squint test,
- Too much whitespace, not enough balace or contrast in shape.
I feel the font for logo and homepage needs a lot more thickness to cope with a variety of output mediums, for screen I think it’s too thin.
Colour scheme: With the Greens we really need a contrast to give life to the page as with the text only design my brain can’t start it’s usual lazy speed-reading as I see no visual cues to differentiate important between elements.
I see great vibrancy in your folio, and feel you are too tame elsewhere.
Hope this isn’t harsh for you, and g’luck with it 
Robbie
