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anitalund, post: 246928, member: 71631 wrote:
Hi – just looking for some feedback on the following page http://www.trainers-direct.com.au/excel-training-sydney I have added links to a new Microsoft online testing page where users can take a quiz to find out how competent they are using MS Office apps and downloadable shortcuts. My question is… is it all too busy and driving away from what the page is about? or is it relevant and useful? Many thanks.

Anita Lund
http://www.trainers-direct.com.au
Hi Anita,

There is a LOT of info on the page which does make it very busy.

Editing is about coming up with a simple message directed to who needs your service the most.

For example, “Excel Short courses for people that …….”

Cheers