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valentlau
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Good to see you here. I have a few opinions which may not necessarily be correct ;)

1) Your lack of location/address near the contact form doesn’t help client confidence.

2) When you’re next in Sydney, I want to help you with your profile shot. It’s great you put yourself out there, but a headshot should do so much more, it should actually work for you.

3) Your copy could use help. Eg “have come to gain a pretty good” is both passive and lukewarm. It could be much stronger.