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    Hi All Soloists,
    we finally have our new website up at http://www.3rddesign.com.

    Note: that it is just a couple of days since its been up so we are still bug testing and fixing up spellings, but if you guys find anything out of whack with the site display or programming or the site is not loading on your PC please let us know and I will proceed to jump out the window, hehehe, no just joking, we would greatly greatly appreciate it.

    thanking you

    Joe
    http://www.3rddesign.com

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    Looks pretty good! Some really excellent Joomla sites in your portfolio too.

    Only minor issue is the phone numbers on your contact page break across two lines – Safari 5.0.4 at 1440×900.

    Running through your copy is probably also a good idea as there are a few grammatical errors around the place.

    Cheers,
    Victor

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    JaneB
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    I can’t answer from the tech point of view but as a lover of good English I have some quibbles. You need to have it proofread for grammatical errors. You have plural and singular mixed up in quite a few places and you are using capital letters unnecessarily.

    i.e. On the partnership page you have written “3rddesign.com are currently forging strong relationships…” This should be “is” not “are”. Your company is a single entity. Even better would be “has forged…”

    On the home page you have “3rddesign Studios is developed as an Online E-Advertising service that encompasses a total marketing solutions”. This is very awkwardly expressed. It is slightly more readable with “3rddesign Studios is an online e-advertising service that creates total marketing solutions”.

    A professional copywriter could suggest something even better and I suggest that you find one to look over your website – it won’t cost much but the way it is currently written will cost you some fussy customers.

    Hope that helps – good luck with everything. :)

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    MightyJoe, post: 71598 wrote:
    Hi All Soloists,
    we finally have our new website up at http://www.3rddesign.com.

    http://www.3rddesign.com

    Really nice design Joe. Congrats.

    The ony possible quibble I could have is in regards to your footer links.

    I think they are a bit too “greyed out” – especially for tired old eyes like mine. ;)

    I know they illuminate when you run your cursor across them, but imho it wouldn’t hurt if they were a bit brighter to start with.

    Best wishes!

    Cheers, Ned

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    Melbourne Web Design
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    Hi All,
    thanks for the great feedback. Yes I am looking into the content issues, which is the biggest problem on the site at the moment.

    thanks again.
    Joe

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