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    bayusyerli
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    Hello, My name is Bayusyerli. Now I’m currently running an online business, a web-based graphic design service. Visit desainonline.com. Please don’t forget to review the website.

    Thanks All!

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    Chris Bates
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    Hey Mate,

    Welcome to the website!

    Your website needs a proofread, it has some pretty bad sentence structures in there. It reads as though it has been written by someone who knows English as a second language, and it doesn’t come across as being professional.

    Hope you have fun on the forums!

    Cheers,
    Chris

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