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    Divert To Mobile
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    Could you please review this one too please?

    http://www.littlejapan.com.au

    btw, I know the fb link doesnt work I havent quite figured out what the url is yet :)

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    Blue Jet
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    Hi Divert to Mobile,

    1. What needs reviewing? (i.e. logo, website, idea etc…)
    2. What does your business do?
    3. Who is your target market?
    4. What specific concerns do you have?

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    Blue Jet, post: 121027 wrote:
    Hi Divert to Mobile,

    1. What needs reviewing? (i.e. logo, website, idea etc…)
    2. What does your business do?
    3. Who is your target market?
    4. What specific concerns do you have?

    judging from your questions I’d say the site fails epically

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    Divert To Mobile, post: 121046 wrote:
    judging from your questions I’d say the site fails epically

    Hi Divert To Mobile,
    I don’t think it’s an epic fail :) I think Blue Jet was just suggesting that we may need some more information before giving feedback.
    Those are the questions that we ask in the community review guidelines at the top of the page to help give us some background/context to the review so that you can get meaningful feedback.
    Cheers
    Peter

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    thats a relief.

    So let me rephrase it.

    1. Does it look ok aesthetically?
    2. Does it look like it was made by a non professional web designer? (to a person who does not make websites professionally)
    3. Does it have any typos?
    4. Is it clear what is offered
    5. is it easy to navigate

    Steve

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    Divert To Mobile, post: 121063 wrote:
    thats a relief.

    So let me rephrase it.

    1. Does it look ok aesthetically?
    2. Does it look like it was made by a non professional web designer? (to a person who does not make websites professionally)
    3. Does it have any typos?
    4. Is it clear what is offered
    5. is it easy to navigate

    Steve

    Now I think that’s a fail :) You didn’t address the questions in the guidelines … again …

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    Blue Jet
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    Divert To Mobile, post: 121046 wrote:
    judging from your questions I’d say the site fails epically

    At the time I didn’t even click on your website :)
    As Peter said those are the questions that will help you get significant feedback about your website.

    1. Your website is a great looking website, first time I clicked on your website it took a while to load.
    2. Your site lacks a sitemap.xml file. Read more on Google’s guidelines
    3. Your site does not have a favicon, it can help you brand your site and make it easy for users to navigate to your site among a list of bookmarks. Learn more about generating and installing a favicon
    4. Your website does not contain any H1 or H2 headings.
    5. I don’t see any Keyword tags on your page. You should include meta-keywords to help indicate what your page is about to search engines.
    6. Also The meta description tag I think is missing.
    7. Your facebook url is http://www.facebook.com/pages/Beauty-Salon-Little-Japan/194976273912617
    8. Your twitter link is broken (404)

    I hope this helps to improve your website.

    p.s looking forward to see what Matthew feedback will be :)

    All the best

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