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    markn
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    1. What needs reviewing?

    I’ve spent the last couple of weeks developing a long copy landing page for one of my Adwords campaigns. I’d love to have hired a pro to do this but just couldn’t afford the cost. I am looking for feedback on the content, the flow, the message, and to a lesser extent the layout. Here’s the page:

    http://www.timeclockmts.com/adwords/timesheet-software-long-copy.htm

    2. What does your business do?

    I sell a try-before-you-buy employee time clock program that I wrote.

    3. Who is your target market?

    Small businesses. Primarily US based.

    4. What specific concerns do you have?

    I’ve never done long copy before, all my pages up until this point have been short form or strictly informational. I spent a long time reading about long copy, how it is structured, and the sort of language required. I’m looking for feedback on what is essentially a first draft.

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