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    Venano
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    Dear All,

    Our site is aimed at promoting our products to customers with the intent to purchase from our retail customers.

    As we bring on board retailers, their details are added under the stockist page.

    Do not expect to see prices or an eCommerce site that you can buy from online.

    Our intent is branding and marketing our brand through visulisation of our products online and direct our customers to retail outlets to purchase.

    Any feedback on our new and improved site (after comments received from many of you last time) is highly welcomed.

    http://www.venano.com.au

    Thanking you all in advance.
    Eugene
    Venano Jewellery

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    MatthewKeath
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    Hi Eugene,

    I like it better than your last site, but it’s still disappointing. It’s great to some large images, but the design is not very inspirational.

    A jewelry site needs to reach out of the screen and slap you in the face. “LOOK AT ME THEN BUY” needs to be the feeling the user gets when viewing.

    To give you some inspiration here are some jewelry site which this has been achieved.

    http://www.viventy.de/en/
    http://www.harrywinston.com/
    http://www.scotch-soda.com/au/
    http://www.leviev.com/#/home.php

    Good luck!

    #1114320
    Divert To Mobile
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    I think it looks ok,

    The German site that Matthew linked to is amazing tho.

    Steve

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    Hi,

    The page is not too bad, but with your quality product could be a lot better.
    I’m guessing you did it yourself? I don’t mean to offend but it doesn’t look professionally designed, and being in such a competitive industry it probably needs to be.

    Also quite slow to load for me, but not sure if that’s just me.

    Main thing I wanted to point out was your title tags. “Products |” is not a good title tag – at a minimum it needs your brand name! Have a read here as to why that’s important.

    Matt

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    Vilson
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    i think no clear message that what your are Doing and require some content on your Home page..Else is Good.

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    RedPlanet
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    Yes I agree, as a copywriter, I would advise to put a mini “About” or History on your Home Page. This is more important than the News that’s currently there.
    You could explain where the glass is made right up front, I have a Venetian glass necklace and the quality is amazing, so you need to educate others who dont know.

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